Friday, December 5, 2008

Poem while on BART

Love is a wandering fire, and i'm a gust of wind,blowing across the pastures of our loneliness.

And your heart, it can take it,

Though others have only shown you how to break it.

Love is a strike of lighting, and I'm an iron rod,

keeping us staked to eachother.

And your life, we can make it,

Though others have only shown you how to take it.

Love is a land slide, And I'm a faulty foundation,

tumbling and sliding over us both before we can catch our breath.

And your happiness, we'll create it.Though others have only shown you how to degrade it.

1 comment:

aneko said...

you have 12 followers but no comments? i used to write a ton of poetry and musings but now i just code tehehe :) code can be sexy and romantic ;)

after reading your poem i surmise that you're comparing love to forces of nature, very compelling.